Great email subject line - #notjustforkates

We recently provided some tips on email subject headers so thought we'd share an example of a great email subject line, which worked for us!

A few weeks ago I received a marketing email from the Chartered Institute of Marketing (CIM). I have to admit that I normally ignore emails from CIM but the subject line caught my attention so I opened the email.

The email subject was: "Not called Kate? This email is for you." and the content of the email was as follows:

great email subject header

Dear Alison

We’d like to apologise for the bug in our system that called you Kate – whilst this is a perfectly agreeable name, we don’t discriminate and embrace all names, particularly a fine name such as Alison. We’ve despatched a team to find said bug and are working hard to ensure this doesn’t happen again.

Our email was intended to tell you about a special event series we’re running in mid-November, exploring Lessons from today's leaders. I hope our database error doesn’t put you off checking out the events – it’d be great to see you there.

#notjustforkates

After reading the email I went back through my inbox and lo and behold there was an email from CIM addressed to Kate, which I'd completely missed!

The clever inclusion of the #notjustforkates hashtag sparked a lively discussion on Twitter and CIM got lots of profile as a result.

CIM insist that it was a genuine mistake but my suspicious mind thinks it was a deliberate ploy! Regardless, I thought it was great and without that subject line I'd never have opened the email. It definitely worked in CIM's favour to increase awareness of the event!

Straight Marketing
Tawny Bank, Maer Lane
Exmouth, Devon
EX8 2DE

07754 375078

info@straightmarketing.co.uk
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